Dear Dylan, I enjoyed reading your essay. Thank you for sharing. I think it is interesting that you play that many sports. I agree with your belief because I think it is important to work hard too. I think that when you used personal examples it helped the essay alot. You did a good job. Bye- Nicole
Dear Dylan,
ReplyDeleteI enjoyed reading your essay. Thank you for sharing. I think it is interesting that you play that many sports. I agree with your belief because I think it is important to work hard too. I think that when you used personal examples it helped the essay alot. You did a good job.
Bye- Nicole